“Peter!”
shouted his mother from the foot of the stairs.
“What?”
Peter shouted from his bedroom.
“I
need to go into town to get some things for Abigail's party on
Saturday.”
“OK.”
he shouted back.
A moment
later his mum shouted, “Well come on then, I haven't got all day.”
“Can't
I stay here?” he replied from his room.
“No,
you can help me choose a nice birthday present for her.”
“Oh
mu-um.” he moaned, “I'm busy!”
“Busy
playing that play station thing!” his mum retorted, “Now come on,
I'm not leaving you in the house alone.”
“But
I'm ten!” he replied.
“Well
act like it and do as you're told!”
Peter
turned off the play station and dawdled down the stairs to where his
mother was impatiently waiting for him. “It's about time!” she
said as he appeared, “Come on, we haven't got all day.”
His mum
pulled out of the driveway and headed for the town centre. On the way
she made small talk with her son but didn't get much of a response.
“Oh give me some help Peter!” She blurted, “I'm only trying to
think of something for her present, and seeing as you're the one
who'll be giving it to her you really should help me choose
something.”
Peter
sighed impatiently, “Well I don't know what girls like.... a doll
or something.” he suggested.
“I
think she's a bit old for dolls love.” she replied, “She's the
same age as you... you don't want Action Man any more do you?”
“I
guess not.” Peter moaned.
“What
about getting a pretty dress for the party?” his mum suggested.
“Whatever.”
Peter replied unenthusiastically, paying more attention to the
passing scenery that his mother's dulcet tones. “Girls like that
sort of thing I s'pose.”
“Well
that's settled then... do you want to choose one?” his mum smiled.
“What
do I know about dresses?” he shrugged.
“Well
I'll help you if you like.” she suggested.
“OK.”
he moaned.
Eventually
they pulled into the car park and headed on foot to one of the big
department stores. Peter was obviously bored and feeling out of
place, being dragged around endless aisles of skirts, blouses &
dresses. Every so often his mum picked a dress and asked Peter what
he thought of it. “It's horrible.” was his usual reply.
“You're
not being much help Peter.” said his mum after some time.
“Can't
I go and look at the video games?” he moaned.
“No
love, you're here to help me get everything we need for Abigail's
birthday party, and that's what you're going to do.” she explained.
Peter shrugged his shoulders. “Look...” she said, “the sooner
we get what we came for, the sooner we can go and look at the video
games... and if you stop complaining and start helping I 'might' buy
you one.” his mother explained, emphasising the 'might'.
With
this suggestion Peters face brightened up. “Really?” he asked.
“Cool!”
“Only
if you help me choose something nice.” she reminded as she removed
another dress and held it up for him to see. “What about this one?”
Peter
spent a moment looking at it and it's myriad of thrills and ribbons.
He screwed his face up, “No, she's too old for that.” he replied.
His mum
took a second look at the dress before saying, “I suppose so.”
and promptly put it back, “Shame though, it is a pretty dress, but
you're right, it's a bit too young for a ten year old.”
After
three or four other options Peter finally said, “It's OK I guess.”
to one of the dresses his mum selected. “I think she'll like that
one.” he added.
“I'm
sure she will.” said his mum, “Especially all these layers of
netting under the skirt.” she added as she showed her son it's
netted underskirt.
Peter
nodded, thinking only of which video game to get, if he did get one
that is.
His mum
smiled. “Well that's the dress sorted” she said as she turned and
headed for another aisle. “Underwear next.”
“Uhhhh”
Peter moaned as he was dragged off to the underwear department.
Eventually
his mum selected a pair of white frilly knickers, a white lace
trimmed satin slip and a pair of white tights. Peter seemed surprised
by how many presents his mum was buying for Abigail, however, most of
his thoughts were focused on a potential new video game.
“This
way Peter.” his mum stated as she headed to yet another department.
Peter obediently followed. Before long he found himself in the boys
clothes section. “Would you like some new trainers too?” she
asked.
“Yeah
Cool!” he replied, and they headed off to the shoe department where
Peter chose a pair of trainers, when they were at the checkout he
noticed his mother holding a pair of girls shoes too. “Another
present!” he exclaimed.
“Well..." she shrugged, "...one can't
have a new dress without new shoes.” His mother replied, “Do you
like them?” she asked.
Peter
looked at the shoes and replied in a mournful voice, “They're OK I
guess, for a girl.”
His
mother paid for the trainers, the shoes, the underwear and the dress
at the checkout before insisting he carry the shopping bags for her.
He complained but soon ceased his moaning once his mother reminded
him about the prospect of a new video game. “We just need to find
Abigail's present then we'll get you a video game for being a good
boy.” she said.
Peter
was so worked up on the idea of getting a new video game he didn't
really register what his mum had said about getting Abigail a
birthday present. They went to the gift department and chose a
jewellery box for her before heading for the video games. Peter was
spoilt for choice, but eventually settled on the new Medal of Honour
game.
On the
way home in the car his mother thanked him for helping her. Peter
said it was no problem, eager to get home and play his new game. On
their arrival home, Peter immediately ran upstairs clutching his new
video game and headed for his room. A few minutes later his mother
entered and tutted as she noticed him enthralled in his new game. “I
don't know what you boys see in all that shooting.” she sighed.
“It's
cool!” replied Peter, his eyes fixed in the screen. He didn't even
notice his mother placing the underwear & tights in his drawer.
She slyly placed them a few layers down, seeing as he wouldn't need
them for a few days.
“Would
you like to help me wrap Abigail's present?” she asked after
closing his underwear drawer.
“No
it's OK.” he replied, again staying 100% focussed on the screen.
“OK.”
she replied, “I'll do it all as usual.” she added sarcastically.
“Supper will be half an hour.”
Peter
played the game until his mother called him. He'd cleared a couple of
levels already and was in no mood to stop now. “Two minutes!” he
shouted back.
A Couple
of minutes later his mother called again.
“Two
minutes.” he replied, hooked on the game.
“Now.”
she shouted back.
Peter
tutted and pressed pause. “Okay.” he conceded as he jumped up and
headed to the dining room. His supper was waiting for him so he
immediately sat down and started munching away. “Thanks mum.” he
mumbled though a half eaten chip.
“Please
don't talk with your mouth full. You'll have to show better manners
at Abigail's party on Saturday.”
He
swallowed his next mouthful before replying. “I will.” he
promised.
His mum
made small talk over supper. She asked him how the new game was, to
which his reply was detailed and enthusiastic. Not being an
aficionado of such things, she understood that he liked it and very
little else. As usual, Peter cleared the table and placed the
plates in the sink. He noticed the wrapped gift on the side board,
which must have been one of Abigail's presents, he assumed, it being
tied in a big pink bow. He then looked up at the dress hanging from
the picture rail, still in it's clear plastic cover. “It's very
nice don't you think?” his mother asked as she watched him.
“It's
OK I guess.” he replied. “Aren't you going to wrap it too?” he
asked, turning his gaze back on the jewellery box in it's flamboyant
wrapping.
“Of
course not.” she replied matter of factly, “It'd get all creased
and we don't want that do we?”
Peter
shrugged.
“I
love the colour.” said his mum, looking at the dark green velvet
dress, with it's pretty white lace collar and short, lace trimmed
sleeves.
Peter
didn't respond, eager to get back to his game. “Can I go back
upstairs now?” he asked, halfway to the door.
“I
suppose.” replied his mum as he darted off. She smiled to herself
as he disappeared
Over the
next couple of days Peter spent more time playing his new game than
anything else. His mother asked him 3 or 4 times each day if he was
looking forward to the party and reminded him that he'd have to be on
his best behaviour. “Yes.” he half heartedly moaned each time.
Saturday
morning finally arrived. Peter woke to his radio alarm and stole an
extra 20 minutes in bed. His mother knocked on his door before
opening it. “Come on Peter, no laying in bed today.” she said as
she opened the curtains. “I've run the bath for you.”
“Can't
I have some breakfast first?” he yawned as he sat up.
“No
love, bath first.” she said. “I'll get you some clean underwear.”
she added as she opened his drawer and removed a pair of knickers and
the slip.
Peter
watched her remove the items from his drawer. “What are those doing
in there?” he shrieked. “And those?” he protested as she
removed a box which contained his tights.
“Because
they're yours.” she replied dryly. “For Abigail's Party.
Remember?”
“No
they're not!” He insisted, “They're for Abigail's present.”
“I
think you misunderstand Peter.” replied his mum, “The jewellery
box is Abigail's birthday present and these are for you.” she
smiled as she unfolded the white frilly knickers
“B...
but...” Peter stammered, not knowing how to react. “I cant wear
those!” he insisted.
“Well
you can't wear y-fronts under your new dress can you?”
“Wha...
wha..” he stammered. “I don't have a dress.” he insisted as the
penny finally dropped. He knew something wasn't right in town the
other day. Of course Abigail wasn't getting so many presents!
His
mother sighed at his apparent ignorance. “Yes you do.” she
replied, “The one you chose on Wednesday, remember?”
“But
that was for Abigail, you said it was.”
“No, I
said it was for Abigail's party.”
“But...
I cant wear a dress, I'm a boy!” he pleaded.
“And
you're going to a girl's party.” she replied. “Everybody else will
be wearing dresses.”
“But...”
he stammered. “they're girls... they're supposed to wear dresses!”
“Look
love, last year you complained that you 'were
the only boy at her party and felt stupid with all those girls in
their pretty dresses'...”
she quoted his own words exactly. She continued as he listened, open
mouthed, “So this year, you're going to fit in perfectly.”
“But I
can't wear a dress!” he claimed, panic stricken. “I'll look
stupid.”
“No
you wont.” his mum insisted with a smile, “You'll look very
pretty.”
“But
they'll all laugh at me.”
She took
him by the hand, looked him in the eye and promised him they
wouldn't. Unbeknown to Peter, Abigail and her mother knew full well
Peter would be wearing a party dress this year. “Plus...” she
went on, “After half an hour at the party you'll feel right at home
and you won't stand out like a sore thumb.” She explained, holding
his gaze. He conceded with a nod. “Good boy.” she grinned. “Now
lets get you in the bath.”
Peter
gulped and followed her to the bathroom. She placed the knickers and
the slip on the seat next to the bath which was full of fragrant
bubbles. He climbed in. “What's that smell?” he quizzed.
“It's
lavender & rose” she replied. “It's nice isn't it?”
Before
long, Peter was stood in his slip and knickers whilst his mother
dried his hair. Peter nervously thumbed the lace hem of his slip.
“Are you nervous?” she asked.
“A
little.” he replied.
“You'll
be fine.” she reassured. “I promise.” she then led him to his
bedroom where his new dress and shoes waited for him. “Tights
first.” she insisted as she removed them from their box and showed
him how to put them on.
“These
feel funny.” he moaned after pulling them all the way up. He felt
increasingly nervous as he looked down at his white slip and legs.
“That's
understandable.” his mother smiled as she looked at him. “...seeing
as you've never worn tights before.” Inside she gushed. He looks so
sweet. “They look nice though.” she added as she unzipped the
dress.
Peter
gulped as he dutifully stepped in to it. He pushed his arms through
the sleeves before being turned around. His mother pulled up his zip
and turned him around again. A broad grin swept across her face as
she stepped back. “Oh Peter you look lovely!”she said, clasping her hands together.
Peter
looked down at 'his' dress. Green velvet with short sleeves and
fitted to the waist where the full skirt flared out in all
directions. He flattened it so he could see his legs and feet before
looking nervously at his mother's grinning face. “I look like a
girl mum.” he stated, pulling a sulk.
“And
that's the idea.” she smiled. “Let's put your shoes on then you
can have a proper look in my mirror.”
Peter
sat on the edge of his bed, slipped his feet in to his new shoes.
Bending over a netted skirt was a completely new experience for him,
as was fastening girl's shoes onto stockinged feet. He wondered if
girls get butterflies in their tummy too, when they're wearing
something so pretty. His feet felt weird being raised on a small
heel. His legs felt weird clad in white nylon tights. He ran his
hands over his lap. He could just see his white knees beyond the
netted hem of the skirt and in the corners of his eyes he could make
out his puffed sleeves trimmed with white lace.
“Are
you OK Peter? You're very quiet.” his mother asked.
“I
look silly.” he moaned.
“You
honestly don't Peter, you look very nice.” she reassured. “And
I'm sure Abigail will be thrilled that you've made such an effort.”
“But I
feel silly.”
he said, looking up at his mother with pleading eyes.
“Once
you've settled in at the party you'll forget all about feeling
silly.” she explained. “And I'm sure you'll have lots of fun
being one of the girls.” she added joyously. “come on.” she
grinned, taking him by the hand and leading him to the large mirrored
wardrobe in her bedroom.
His jaw
dropped when he saw his reflection. From his neck down to his feet he
was a girl. The black Mary Jane's with their two inch heel made his
feet look tiny and the thick white tights showed his legs in a way
he'd never seen before. The skirt of his dress flared out and the
layers of netted underskirts were just visible. The green velvet
fabric was like nothing he'd worn before. He ran his hands over his
waist and eventually thumbed the hem.
“Doesn't
it feel lovely?” asked his mum.
“It
feels weird.” he replied honestly. “like fur.”
“It
does a bit.” his mum smiled.
He
looked at himself long and hard. “I look like a girl with a boys
head.”
“Well
it's a pity your hair isn't a little longer, but we could take your
fringe off your face with a headband... that would look nice.“ she
suggested.
Before
long Peter was sat in the passenger seat of his mum's car as she drove
him over to Abigail's house. Peters body filled with dread as the
car slowed down and turned on to the driveway. “Well, here we
are.” she said joyfully, turning the engine off.
Peter
gulped. His mother got out and opened the door for him, empathising
with his shyness, she led him to the door and rang the bell. “Abigail
is going to be absolutely over the moon you know?” she said said quietly as
they waited.
The
second Abigail opened the door she shrieked with glee. “Oh Peter you
look excellent!” she exclaimed as she grabbed his hand and dragged
him inside. “I absolutely love your dress. Did you choose it
yourself?”
Peter
stammered, his mum answered for him. “Yes he did!” she said
smiling.
“I
thought it was for you.” he insisted as he felt himself blushing
“...until today.” he frowned. Abigail glanced expectantly at the
gift held in his trembling hands. Peter noticed. “Oh, er... this is
for you, happy birthday.” he said.
“Oh
thank you!” Abigail replied.
Peter
smiled as she placed her gift on the side and began carefully
unwrapping it. She intermittently glanced at Peter and his mother as
she untied the bows before removing the paper. “Oh thank you!”
she gushed. “Look mum! A jewellery box!”
“Oh
that's lovely.” Abigail's mother replied, “And Peter you look
gorgeous as a girl... doesn't he.” she added.
“He
certainly does.” his mother agreed, “...but he's a little shy
because he's not used to looking so pretty... aren’t you dear?”
Peter
gulped, nodded and forced a smile. “You look nice too Aby.” he
said as he observed her dress: purple satin with black tights and
purple ballet pumps.
“Thank
you.” she grinned as she did a twirl. “Come on, lets introduce
you to the girls.” Abigail said as she grabbed Peter by the wrist and
pulled him towards the reception room. She got everybody's attention
and introduced him to the party. Peter smiled shyly at the torrent of
complements which he faced, uttering the odd quiet “Thank you” as
he stood statue like in his party dress.
Eventually
his mother said she'd pick him up later and Abigail's mother asked.
“Isn't Peter staying for the sleepover?”
“Oh I
didn't realise it was sleepover party.”
Peter
looked at each of them nervously.
“Would
you like to sleep over Peter?” asked Abigail's mum as Abigail
nodded at Peter, insisting he say yes. “We have the spare room
reserved for you and the other girls will all be in Aby's room.”
she added.
Peter
noticed Aby beckoning him to say 'yes', so shyly he nodded, before
looking to his mum, hoping she'd get him out of it. “Oh I should
have bought you a nightie and something for tomorrow.” she moaned,
disappointed with her lack of foresight.
“On
well never mind...” Abigail's mother interjected, “...he can
borrow one of Aby's and I'm sure we can find him something for
tomorrow.” she suggested.
“Oh
please do Peter, It'll be fun!” Abigail insisted.
Overwhelmed
with fear, Peter looked up to his mother who was also prompting him
into accepting the offer. Unable to refuse, he agreed to staying the
night. His mother gave him a kiss on the forehead, told him she was
very proud of him, that he looked very pretty and that she hoped he'd
have a nice time before insisting he be on his best behaviour. He
promised her he would and she left.
As his
mother drove home she couldn't help thinking how nice it was to have
a daughter for the day. She felt a little mean for deceiving her son and
hoped he doesn't hold it against her. At the end of the day, it's
Abigail's party and her wish was granted.
"Plus..." she said to herself. "If he really hated it he'd have put up much more of a fight." This thought was followed by a broad knowing grin.
This story is the best what I read please another part of the story?
ReplyDeletethanks in Advance
(my English is poor google translator)
please, please, PLEASE do continue story
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it Lucasz K.
ReplyDeleteThere may well be another part to this.. not sure when i'll finish it though. I hope you enjoy some of my other stories in the mean time :)
hello can find's time to add another part?
ReplyDeleteI should... I really should... Peter's poor mother is missing out on all the girlie fun he's no doubt having at Abigail's party and sleepover.
DeletePJ I loved this story, if only I'd had a mother who could have done the same to me as Peter's mother did to him. I'm sure she would have told him something I've often heard,
ReplyDeleteShe looked at the boy who seemed a bit hesitant of wearing the shimmering velvet dress he had picked in the store.
She sat on the bed and held his hands, they felt a little cool and moist, "Go on Peter, you know you really want to wear it."
Thanks PJ you've made my day.
I loved the story, specially when his mother was dressing him...but did she forget his panties...no mention of them. Panties are a big part of being a sissy.
ReplyDeletethey are there... you must have read it to quickly :)
DeleteLoveily story I enjoyed it very much.
ReplyDeleteLovely story, I always dreamed of wearing my sisters party drsses, they were always so pretty compare to my boring cloths.
ReplyDeletehello can i count on 2 part of this story ??
ReplyDeleteHello Lukasz... every now and then i do consider writing a second part, but after five years, it's becoming increasingly unlikely... but i'm not ruling it out completely :)
DeleteOne of my favorites of all your stories but then most of your stories are my favorites in this genre. Out of curiosity, have your ever written a written this story with a slightly different turn of events titled "My Cousins Birthday Party" under the pseudonym Sissy Roni on FM? If not, then someone ripped off your story plot and much of the text since Abagail's Party was written in 2012 and the FM story dates from 2014. Maybe I'm relating old news or you may consider the imitation the sincerest form of flattery or you really did write under a pen name but just thought you should know. The author, if not you, should have given you the courtesy of naming you as the inspiration for their work. Always a loyal reader.
ReplyDeleteIt's certainly not me (I'm not even sure what 'FM' is). I used to post on Crystal's Story site until it went down... that's when i started this blog.
Deletefound it... on Fiction Mania, of course! I see what you mean. The boys name's been changed to Jason but he's still called Peter occasionally. At least Roni's only plagiarised the one story. :)
DeleteSorry for the "FM" confusion. I didn't know if you wanted to mention other sites on your blog. I know it's 5 years old but just wanted you to be aware since you put in a lot of work producing your stories and captions. Maybe Roni grew a conscience and stopped plagiarizing. :-)
DeleteLooking forward to more of your great work.
No need to apologise BC... I quite liked the ear-piercing scene in Roni's version.
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