tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post5581688600803231734..comments2024-03-18T01:52:33.437-07:00Comments on PJ's Tales of the Petticoated: Door to DoorPJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02470641669916538608noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-72076132633164728642022-12-05T10:32:26.335-08:002022-12-05T10:32:26.335-08:00Bonjour! I'm happy that you can still enjoy my...Bonjour! I'm happy that you can still enjoy my stories despite the translation not being perfect... but my English isn't perfect either which probably doesn't help. :)PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02470641669916538608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-27240870708898966622022-12-05T01:10:07.269-08:002022-12-05T01:10:07.269-08:00bonjour,
Je suis française et j’utilise la traduct...bonjour,<br />Je suis française et j’utilise la traduction pour lire vos merveilleuses histoires. Malheureusement la traduction n’est pas parfaite. Quel dommage que je ne puisse pas lire le texte original mais j’arrive assez bien à suivre les histoires.<br />Merci pour ces textes qui sont délicieux et me rappelle un peu mon enfance.<br />la vie en rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01504631565686979036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-1075251558869083402022-07-08T23:54:48.400-07:002022-07-08T23:54:48.400-07:00ChuckSavage
Don’t let the errors stop you from wr...ChuckSavage <br />Don’t let the errors stop you from writing. I have the same problem. I can read a story I’ve written a dozen times and still not catch all the errors. So write more. It’s the story that counts and yours are always fantastic. My only complaint is that your characters are so great I always want to read more of their story.<br />ChuckAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-9851652139674864632021-09-24T07:14:56.113-07:002021-09-24T07:14:56.113-07:00Thank you (Roger again, I presume). Unfortunately ...Thank you (Roger again, I presume). Unfortunately I don't have a (good) grammar checker and tools like Grammarly don't work for pages with more than a few hundred words... and as you probably know, proof reading your own work doesn't really work because we tend to read what we think we've written rather than what's actually written.<br /><br />I really do appreciate the time you've put into listing my mistakes for me. I am working through them slowly :)<br /><br />PS. I have no intention of publishing an ebook. All of my stories will always be available for free online for any adult who wants to read them.PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02470641669916538608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-37618837304197930802021-09-19T07:38:28.465-07:002021-09-19T07:38:28.465-07:00Plausible, good plotting, knowledgeable background...Plausible, good plotting, knowledgeable background info (about government bureaucracies and details of female clothing), good dialoging, good pacing—only lacks good copy-editing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-91089113938206426632021-09-19T00:48:47.866-07:002021-09-19T00:48:47.866-07:00One of my readers has been very kindly sending me ...One of my readers has been very kindly sending me lists of all the typos and errors in some of my stories. Thank you Roger! Very much appreciated :)<br /><br />Every time I go back to read one of my stories, all I see is numerous typos and grammatical errors littered throughout them. I sometimes correct them, but if there's a lot (which there often are) ...it's just too time consuming.<br /><br />With regards to 'pasties'... in the UK a pasty is common a type of pie; as in Cornish Pasty (pl. pasties). Pasties are also sticky nipple covers here too :)<br /><br />Thank you againPJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02470641669916538608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-85008313135651269352021-04-14T20:07:51.900-07:002021-04-14T20:07:51.900-07:00I do have a problem with your stories. You make yo...I do have a problem with your stories. You make your characters so interesting one doesn’t want their stories to end. I really would love to see how Emma reacts when she discovers her mother’s new maid. Just one more chapter please. <br />Chuck Chuck Savagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05475909242377746885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-17935113491017181682021-04-10T14:45:07.854-07:002021-04-10T14:45:07.854-07:00Well, it was time very well spent, PJ. You certai...Well, it was time very well spent, PJ. You certainly DO put your heart and soul into your stories. It was a very adroit twist how you managed to move Daniel out of his tatty old bedsit into Mrs. Haverthwaite's box bedroom, Emma's castoffs and into a new life as essentially Mrs. Haverthwaite's indentured housekeeper. <br /><br />Even though you do protest, maybe in time some ideas of Daniel's further adventures might pop into your head and bear transcription. <br /><br />Thank you for a very wonderful story. mikkihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14290416461241329215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-49096698436838782362021-04-09T09:55:22.809-07:002021-04-09T09:55:22.809-07:00There's definitely not going to be a follow up...There's definitely not going to be a follow up to this one. I think almost two years in the making and 32,000 words is enough :)PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02470641669916538608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-86691117690158703552021-04-09T09:33:56.485-07:002021-04-09T09:33:56.485-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.mr. Turnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03723197345318369466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-91847357416165093322021-04-07T15:19:21.571-07:002021-04-07T15:19:21.571-07:00Thank you so much for this wonderful story PJ, it ...Thank you so much for this wonderful story PJ, it was a pleasure to read it from start to finish and it was great to see how you can get a detailed description of Daniel's tasks and the way he performs them to become an interesting and worth reading part of whole story.<br />A lady like Mrs. Haverthwaite can put all social authorities to shame, what could not have come out of Daniel if he had not bumped into her.<br />It could be really interesting to hear about how things have gone for Daniel since in the development Mrs Haverthwaite has started for him. Corinnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16125068232310306438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-87207689221762877272021-04-07T04:00:39.257-07:002021-04-07T04:00:39.257-07:00What an amazing story full of such graphic details...What an amazing story full of such graphic details, you truly put your heart & soul into the stories I always look forward to reading them so please keep up the outstanding work, cannot wait for the next one.Pennystu.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02756702016717068048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-52414384809834964562021-04-06T07:33:37.160-07:002021-04-06T07:33:37.160-07:00How exiting!
Lovely story, PJ!
I think Daniel is...How exiting!<br /> Lovely story, PJ!<br /> I think Daniel is going to be full time Danielle very soon!<br /> I confess that I have devoured history and I have been wanting much more.<br /><br /> Congratulations on all your stories!algorianohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15785327814411373125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3807062455828867273.post-84530608053327011672021-04-05T17:22:25.013-07:002021-04-05T17:22:25.013-07:00Great story filled with thrilling details and Dani...Great story filled with thrilling details and Daniels dresses both work and off-time are perfect for situation at hand. He’s very lucky in more ways than one. Aidanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14144273195852689951noreply@blogger.com